The Cloud

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 The Cloud

               

Hi I am a cool,best and helpful could cause this is the thing I’m not a normal cloud I’m a cool one cause I can go through things and plus I am made out of water and then I can  help people.I always go to people to let them look at my brothers and sisters and this is how they see my brothers and sisters. so they follow me and then I will go to my brothers and sisters so they can see them and them I will help if I have to help others cause I’m a kind cloud.

I have to go everywhere, when I go over the nice city's cause I have to so I can see my brothers and my sisters and that's how nice I am to them so they can help me out with staff  and then I always help but they help as well.

I also go to help but they can’t help me back but I think they try help me back I think they do but I want them to help me with some thing cause I love helping but...I really do want them to help but they don’t help me cause I fly and they don’t fly like me.

I went everywhere one time but...when I went to go to my last place I went so I went in I got a big,giant,tall and strongest shock in my life and then this was the scary part a cat thing came out of nowhere and then the cat said…”hhhhh” and then I ran away,  cause I was scared cause I don’t like doing that because it is so so so sore that’s why.

I really like doing this like helping and I haven't told you this but once I saw a fire and then people were trying and trying to put the fire out and then I came and put the fire out cause I’m not just normal cloud I’m an amazing cloud but....people don’t love me back.

Here is some way that clouds can help you.

They block the sun if it is to hot

They can always help you when you have a fire and it is raining.

If it is so hot it will maybe block it and then it will go windy.

Here is some ways that clouds can not help you.

If it is hot it will go raining.

If it is a raining day it will not help you.

Like if you have a netball game it will be raining.

Like if you don’t have you shoes on and you have socks on and then you walk into the rain.

So that’s how they can or not but I always be helpful and then I went to go to see what people were doing today but they were not doing much today because it is so so so so raining outside and then I saw someone doing a rugby game and then I saw that girl slip over her shoes lace and then she got a broken arm and then I could just made it reverse and then I made her tie her shoes up and that’s how I became good but that was heaps of years ago.

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Tom True heart

Once I was a little boy and I was a size of a thrum, so I was so scared and  whenever animal’s came passed me I hide under a leaves so I got out of the leaves and I was in a snow mountain and the I got a nice and fluffy coat to have on me so I went to a cool,loud,funny,nice and freezing place and then I went to go onto a amazing place in the forest.

I went onto a big,giant,cool,best and amazing place up in a tree and then I went to go onto the best hiding space in my life it was in a little,tiny and warm place it was in a little hole in a tree and then I went to go to get some food and why I was walking I just remember that my family was gone

Then when I finished my food i was trying to find my family and the I went to go look and look and search for 5 days and then I once saw them and I said is that yous my family and then they looked at me and they said yes that is us and then I ran to them and then I and then they ran to me and then I hugged Them.

Then we went to my house up in that tree so they had to live with me and then……...we went out to get some food and then I saw a bird it was trying to get my mum,dad,sister’s and brother’s so I had the lucy sard and then I went to go make it look at the sard and then it died so that's what my sard dose I was telling yous.

But I have on problem I am a size of a thurm people keep saying ahaha you are as small as a ant plus you are as small as a sipe and I don’t like it can yous do something about it please cause yous are way taller then me please and they said” yes we will help you what help do you need”I said “thank you so much for your help thank you”and they said”it’s ok that’s what we always do to our family” and I said “ohhh that's nice of yous,yous are a nice family to me” but when I went out to go get food I had one problem a robber came the one that  tried to get my nice and best family ever and then I went to go get my best sard it could do anything when big people me it is so so so so cool but there was heaps of there big and giant thing it was so so so scary AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA IT IS ONLY COMING FOR MEEEEE they were like

“HAHAHA” and I said  “what is happening yous run under the tree again plz i'll get the food”, they said ‘ok we will do that for you” and then I just got passed them when...
A foxx came “AAAAAAAAWWW”said the foxx “i’m going to kill you this time” i said “ nooooooo it’s the animal that came before that and then I was so so so scared i new that the foxx would come to me  I knew it would cause it always comes to me cause the big big foxx is evil because …….“ it is going for my family nooooo” I am so scared why do you they have to do that ok then come for me then not them please and the fox said “ok i will do that” and I scream “AHHHH what is happening right here i’m only a size of a thurm remember that” and then...one day I finally made the foxx die cause I was fighting for ever and ever so i was going to get some food for my family and it was so so so so scary cause no one was around me cause i’m a little,tiny,small and cool person so I was trying to get my family to come with me so I wasn’t so scared and then…..yay they were coming and then I said… “yay thank yous for coming with me so I was not scared” and they said…”it’s ok” and then we went home to go to eat our food and then I found a big,giant,biggest,tall and tallest bird in my life so I went outside and gave it food for it so I  could keep the big bird and then I went to go find my family again cause they ran away with my food and I was so starving so I  and then I went to go find them on my  big bird and then I went and went and went to go fast as a trigger but faster than that and then I found then and then we all went to bed after that big and giant day cause I am so little and I was so so so lucky from my family and then I went to sleep and then i was so so so tired.

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Arctic Circle

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Ngapotiki Arctic Circle

Once I went to a old,cold and freezing place even though that I was cold I had to work so hard the thing that I was doing was……...I had to spin this thing and then one day one apple came off the tree so…. I got it I was so hungry that I only took like 5 scenes to eat the apple so I saw a orange box and then I walked up to it and then I touched it and it gave me a shock then I holded it, I got so heated and then I went to the tree and then I touched it after that heaps of apples came off the tree.

I ate one apple and then I saw the magical box move so I walked up to the box and then the box kept walking away it was so hard to get it and then i finally got the brown and red box I was playing around with my hands and then  was feeling so happy and then……I was turning into a box I was not feeling happy after that happend so I was shouted TIM HELP ME PLEASE tim walked out of the house and he thought ohh I think that was in my heap cause I was in the box then when that happened it was so bad I there but i’m so sleepy i mite go for a sleep but……..TIM HELP HELP HELP PLEASE but he did it again sooooo I went to go to his house and Tim heard the bell ring and then I Tim saw the box from me yay.

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WALT solve addition and subtraction problems where the numbers are easily related to near double’s. I hope you enjoy it

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kia ora whanau. This I my collection of whakatakauki and what they mean I hope you enjoy reading I will be adding a new slides every week .